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Garen Marie's avatar

I can feel the sizzle of anger and resentment. Interesting concept and great execution. I want to read more!

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Linnhe Harrison's avatar

Thank you so much! If you fancy *a lot * more I've also been posting the first draft of a dystopian novella on my other Substack... https://machinesofthinkery.substack.com

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Johnathan Reid's avatar

'Silo' suffocation meets 'Twelve Monkeys' madness meets 'The Lobster' dystopia, with many a dark shade of Black Mirror grey. Nicely done.

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Linnhe Harrison's avatar

What a lovely comment, very happy with all of those comparisons …thank you!!

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Larry Hogue's avatar

Great story! I liked the slow drip of world-building and the interplay between the two quite different characters.

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Linnhe Harrison's avatar

Thank you! 🙏

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Linnhe Harrison's avatar

Thank you so much 🙏 I was worried I’d gone a bit too dark (esp as my previous two stories were bitter sweet!)

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